tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26781576.post4213398881437689501..comments2023-03-27T04:50:21.919-07:00Comments on Cross-leaved Heather: homelessHeatherhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13154961922855078245noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26781576.post-17507540067819300332011-02-21T13:16:41.831-08:002011-02-21T13:16:41.831-08:00Anyone close to someone in these circumstances fee...Anyone close to someone in these circumstances feels deeply your beautiful verse. Thank you for such a moving, thoughtful expression!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26781576.post-32412425562726938762011-02-17T02:11:19.817-08:002011-02-17T02:11:19.817-08:00Your imagery and verse is perfect and I really rel...Your imagery and verse is perfect and I really relate to the thoughts that you have created with your words in my mind..<br /><br /><br />ॐ नमः शिवाय<br />Om Namah Shivaya<br />http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/02/whispers-night-along-sea.html<br />Twitter @VerseEveryDayShashidhar Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752054354309206121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26781576.post-73211905857366396612011-02-16T14:16:39.951-08:002011-02-16T14:16:39.951-08:00Intense and painful. Your words hit hard. I know t...Intense and painful. Your words hit hard. I know this pain. Beautiful piece. ♥Jessica Kristiehttp://jessicakristie.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26781576.post-57703694948008044972011-02-16T10:21:42.527-08:002011-02-16T10:21:42.527-08:00We are all just steps away, in some form or anothe...We are all just steps away, in some form or another. You captured it most excellently.<br /><br />Roary@CoyoteSingshttp://mydreamsmoveslowly.tumblr.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26781576.post-38359583620093213262011-02-16T10:00:43.731-08:002011-02-16T10:00:43.731-08:00...all that's left is dirt and words...deeply ......all that's left is dirt and words...deeply felt.kolembohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03367654070938475878noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26781576.post-54317591196160018532011-02-16T00:53:23.196-08:002011-02-16T00:53:23.196-08:00Powerful as always..I love your writing Heather! :...Powerful as always..I love your writing Heather! :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26781576.post-24620879314220364102011-02-15T22:05:35.255-08:002011-02-15T22:05:35.255-08:00Wow! That's very powerful!Wow! That's very powerful!Mad Kanehttp://www.madkane.com/humor_blog/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26781576.post-91427632734152177292011-02-15T21:45:51.563-08:002011-02-15T21:45:51.563-08:00all that is left is dirt and words...tight. i like...all that is left is dirt and words...tight. i like the repitition as well of i know how people become homeless...it drives the piece...nicely done.Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26781576.post-40868523034905496992011-02-15T19:34:37.597-08:002011-02-15T19:34:37.597-08:00Those last four lines for me as well. Wanting to p...Those last four lines for me as well. Wanting to protect what you once appeared to be, and fading away because of it. Very good.Sarahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12485578707356486342noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26781576.post-85029460599247305472011-02-15T19:14:57.748-08:002011-02-15T19:14:57.748-08:00"I'd rather waste away than have you see ..."I'd rather waste away than have you see / What's become of me" In many cases it is that decimated pride that wins out. Hard-hitting poem.dustushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07796500077556153584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26781576.post-39791147344554184012011-02-15T18:36:39.502-08:002011-02-15T18:36:39.502-08:00I love this piece and it hits home in many ways fo...I love this piece and it hits home in many ways for me. Very honest and I enjoyed how much imagery spouts out of such concise and thoughtful wording. Cheers!Don't Want A Real Jobhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01379423402452855166noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26781576.post-31478238375796983522011-02-15T17:56:28.217-08:002011-02-15T17:56:28.217-08:00I had my favorite lines picked out well above the ...I had my favorite lines picked out well above the end. but the last four lines got me. beautiful, heather, as you always do :)Montyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17446385166445251013noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26781576.post-89405856716173569982011-02-15T17:53:37.365-08:002011-02-15T17:53:37.365-08:00powerful. dirt and words. well done.powerful. dirt and words. well done.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26781576.post-11307731989381516162011-02-15T17:38:36.935-08:002011-02-15T17:38:36.935-08:00heather, this is really good. very precise in link...heather, this is really good. very precise in linking an emotion to an image. Even the break of the hook - i know how people become homeless - was well done between the penny and foundation lines. I especially liked how you brought the image of the penny back 'bottom...penny jar.'<br /><br />A sad and thought-provoking piece.<br /><br />RSRasiihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10635336690574067102noreply@blogger.com