tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26781576.post7030614568760104170..comments2023-03-27T04:50:21.919-07:00Comments on Cross-leaved Heather: sheHeatherhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13154961922855078245noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26781576.post-71333913987650739972012-04-04T04:56:39.386-07:002012-04-04T04:56:39.386-07:00Loneliness brings so many terrors yet somehow thos...Loneliness brings so many terrors yet somehow those terrors are often unseen by the person experiencing them. There is pain of the body and pain of the soul, the one of the soul sometimes remains unacknowledged since it is so close to who we are. Very close to the bone and such stark awareness in your poem.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08784125345525784337noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26781576.post-36518333624547717962012-04-04T01:18:32.190-07:002012-04-04T01:18:32.190-07:00six feet of beeutiful depth here. your poetry rea...six feet of beeutiful depth here. your poetry really wrenches in each word here for me .. its so so moving and hard also to take in so much.. Love this Feathers my friend always down under ;) beezbeezknezhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06115744954977329924noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26781576.post-58892228743695540342012-04-03T23:52:46.177-07:002012-04-03T23:52:46.177-07:00Excellent write. The repetition is done so well h...Excellent write. The repetition is done so well here. I love the way you introduced the six feet measurement in an earlier stanza then mention lying down later on- fits together perfectly. ThanksAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05885047796180529498noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26781576.post-46276265150793837022012-04-03T16:38:19.427-07:002012-04-03T16:38:19.427-07:00so much loneliness
opportunity on marsso much loneliness<br /><br /><a href="http://zongrik.wordpress.com/2011/08/28/opportunity-on-mars/" rel="nofollow">opportunity on mars</a>Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26781576.post-76657813918372257452012-04-03T14:52:04.876-07:002012-04-03T14:52:04.876-07:00Love this--powerful write--Love this--powerful write--Audrey Howitt aka Divaloungerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06854425983822589062noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26781576.post-58922586321158253162012-04-03T13:54:12.383-07:002012-04-03T13:54:12.383-07:00i like that you measure longing in feet..how cool ...i like that you measure longing in feet..how cool is that..Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26781576.post-61489565636746613972012-04-03T12:50:28.251-07:002012-04-03T12:50:28.251-07:00destiny felt steel wool again...wow great line...a...destiny felt steel wool again...wow great line...also love the replacement of she in each and her love of she...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26781576.post-71393389604857596362012-04-03T12:32:30.997-07:002012-04-03T12:32:30.997-07:00Wow. Very powerful. Deserves me to read it again t...Wow. Very powerful. Deserves me to read it again to hear the words, again.Beckyhttp://bsain.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.com