Heather is one of the Bach flower remedies - heather: need for company, talks about self, and concentrates on own problems
February 8, 2011
singularity
I think
Post human
Source code
Intelligence
Super
Intelligence
Transcendence
Unlimited
Smoke and flamed
Event horizon
Sucked and
Created
Spun black
Tech chip
In dust
Death
My new drug
A zombie
Delicacy
Woww... good stuff, Heather... those short lines made the poem so intense and fast paced... really enjoyed it! I think I could read a lot emotions in this one... a nice and succinct One Shot!!
9 comments:
Your use of single words and brief lines leads to multiple interpretations, which makes the poem singular. Very well done.
i
could
not
agree
more
smiles. some interesting things come to mind in the quick pace of the read...
Wow, this is a speaking thing and it speaks to me :)
Creative and your message came through. Very cool!
Very cool form for the message!
My One Shot: A Letter to Saint Valentine
Singular sensation
many neuron responses
nuanced between the words
interesting
unique.
Thanks,
Gay @beachanny
I like the form you used. It helps solidify the singular image.
Dear Heather...
Its powerfully written with so few words.. I enjoyed it so much...
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/02/whispers-another-kind-of-valentines-day.html
Woww... good stuff, Heather... those short lines made the poem so intense and fast paced... really enjoyed it! I think I could read a lot emotions in this one... a nice and succinct One Shot!!
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