Slipping into night
Undressed... exposed
To dark shadows
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Love worn corners
Beneath wet fingertips
Electric touch
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Her spine arced to him
He bends with her
Becoming wind
¤
In one breath
Melting every moment
Before him
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Silk of her wings
Wrapped his every move
Like freshly dried sheets
Warm against his skin
13 comments:
Your imagery is magnificent! The heat is felt and balanced by the cool wind of breezes... wondrous poetry! My pleasure to read indeed!
wow, quite sensual...but in a very gentle way...
MMMMMM, well delivered .
Tastefully sensual, erotic. Perfect way to end the day! Thank you.
Highlighting the sensual quality of the wind, the caress of the earth's breath-on-skin...strong yet, as Brian put it, gentle imagery, a soothing touch of nature.
Magnificent!
very nicely written
Well written bit of sultriness.
Trying to remember a time so nice... :)) _/|\_
always a good read and this no exception, heather. erotic :)
Monty / bum
very nice... sensual withut the smut.. or the cliche... love the tercets also.
warmest salad
Luke @ WordSalad
Refreshing take on an erotic situation. Lukes right no cliche was nice to see :)
neat..
keep it up..
Please feel free to share 1 to 3 poems with our potluck poetry today, first time participants could use old poems or poems unrelated to our theme, Thanks..
Happy Monday!
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