Shades of green
Drift from her
In undersea waves
A handmade dress
Patchworked jealousy
From late night
Glassy eyes
Woven for him and
Frayed at her ankles
She collects
Threads of regret
With numb, calloused fingers
Rebraiding all the nonsense
Into wings
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and let those words fly ~ beautiful ~ Lib ~ @libithina
dense, flowing, fluid, sensitive, economical. awesome.
Like the creation feel of this - the weave that binds it all, from the "patchwork jealousy" and "handmade dress" to "threads of regret" and "rebraiding all the nonsense". Good image, concise and effective--evokes strong sentiments of sadness for the woman, forced to face the long nights of uncertainty.
perhaps she will learn how to fly...far away from any regrets...
Dont know why -but I quite liked it. flowed and charmed perhaps
Dear Heather
Very beautiful and I liked the feel of it.. it had so many levels to connect to... thanks for sharing...
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In and out, in and out...I had that feeling, which is good!
an ordinary moment
Fashioning threads of regret into wings.... given the context, a beautiful thought that works on many levels.
Maybe you will want to add a twitter button to your website. I just marked down this site, but I must complete it manually. Just my suggestion.
The imagery is amazing in this one. Love it!
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