Heather is one of the Bach flower remedies - heather: need for company, talks about self, and concentrates on own problems
gosh..tight and touching write this..
short and powerful - a punch and a half here - nicely done!
Those bones crack, just don't break your back..haha Great write, powerful indeed.
Wow! I had a friend who had a condition called osteogenesis imperfecta. This told her story. Very effective poem.
Great poem - love its simplicity - I feel for th whales and dolphins too
mmm. felt the sting in this one...brittle bones...
Funny I should read this just when my doc ordered me take calcium to ward off osteoporosis...hey but all kidding aside, you remind of an almost lost art in the scrimshaw..and to a unique take on soul pain. Nicely done!
i agree for marousia -> i feel for the whales
wow! marrow for sale. the brevity of this is striking - really like the way you wrote this.
Wonderful and touching write. Well done!http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2012/01/10/the-sun-came-up-again-4/
I love this and its brutal brevity
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gosh..tight and touching write this..
short and powerful - a punch and a half here - nicely done!
Those bones crack, just don't break your back..haha Great write, powerful indeed.
Wow! I had a friend who had a condition called osteogenesis imperfecta. This told her story. Very effective poem.
Great poem - love its simplicity - I feel for th whales and dolphins too
mmm. felt the sting in this one...brittle bones...
Funny I should read this just when my doc ordered me take calcium to ward off osteoporosis...hey but all kidding aside, you remind of an almost lost art in the scrimshaw..and to a unique take on soul pain. Nicely done!
i agree for marousia -> i feel for the whales
wow! marrow for sale. the brevity of this is striking - really like the way you wrote this.
Wonderful and touching write. Well done!
http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2012/01/10/the-sun-came-up-again-4/
I love this and its brutal brevity
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