The calm
Of a single line
Outlined music
For two
A stringed aria
Curved then
Curve again
Holding weight
Of fingers
In the pour
Dimpled recognition
Her eyes
Closed and
Close again
The calm
Of a single line
Heat distracted
Supernova
Releasing a
Spray of stars
His line
Becomes light
And sighs
And she opens
To calm
10 comments:
Enjoyed this, Heather!
Beautiful writing Heather!
Complex, rich, intriguing
nice...i love the geometry through out this...and the cascade form you take works really well in this...nice....
Calm before the storm maybe, nice write!
You have limned the passions so intimately. It is a dance I see, and one so lovingly told and lived.
nice job, really liked this, for the words and the presentation of those words, quite the read. Thanks
Lovely, Heather...Thank you!
Wonderful cascade of imagery..spirals over itself in prose form, beautifully delivered, love it :)
a stringed aria . . . a spray of stars -- a beautiful blend of words here. a blending of delicacy & strength, too. beautiful to read.
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