Choosing choice
Nice
Helped hand
To swollen bones
Bleeded path
Nice
Vein split
Toxin pulse
Blur
Nice
Blur
Paralyzed
Thrown dirt
Like roots
Like the squirm
Of earthworms
Still
Nice
Dissected
Eyes open
Watching the cut
In slow breath
Nice
Hide hung
Red rivered
Strips
Then nothing
Nice
2 comments:
eerrr...nice...the dissected eye is intense...and watching the cuts...oy...that gave me a little bit of a shiver...
If you're trying to say something about the use of the word "nice' you sure have said it...it's lost its meaning, hasn't it..like "cute" I like the economy of structure here. Nice! Oops!
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