David mentioned it, but It such a good comment I wanted to mention it again, the poem reads and is seen in a gravitational manner, great job there. Gravity is a huge subject that could be handled in so many ways, I think the way you tackled it was very good. Nice job. Thanks
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i like the way the words drop, visually & aurally.
gravity will get you everytime...unless you got wings....
ha - if we only could overcome gravity sometimes...like a bird..sigh...nicely penned...
David mentioned it, but It such a good comment I wanted to mention it again, the poem reads and is seen in a gravitational manner, great job there. Gravity is a huge subject that could be handled in so many ways, I think the way you tackled it was very good. Nice job. Thanks
Nicely done. Reads well.
Nice,,,I agree with Brian..gravity will get you every time.
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