February 8, 2011

singularity

I think
Post human
Source code
Intelligence
Super
Intelligence
Transcendence
Unlimited
Smoke and flamed
Event horizon
Sucked and
Created
Spun black
Tech chip
In dust
Death
My new drug
A zombie
Delicacy

9 comments:

dustus said...

Your use of single words and brief lines leads to multiple interpretations, which makes the poem singular. Very well done.

Brian Miller said...

i
could
not
agree
more

smiles. some interesting things come to mind in the quick pace of the read...

Gracetalking said...

Wow, this is a speaking thing and it speaks to me :)

jessicakristie.com said...

Creative and your message came through. Very cool!

Rachel Hoyt said...

Very cool form for the message!

My One Shot: A Letter to Saint Valentine

Beachanny said...

Singular sensation
many neuron responses
nuanced between the words
interesting
unique.
Thanks,
Gay @beachanny

randallweiss said...

I like the form you used. It helps solidify the singular image.

Shashi said...

Dear Heather...

Its powerfully written with so few words.. I enjoyed it so much...


ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/02/whispers-another-kind-of-valentines-day.html

Kavita said...

Woww... good stuff, Heather... those short lines made the poem so intense and fast paced... really enjoyed it! I think I could read a lot emotions in this one... a nice and succinct One Shot!!