Rocked wood
Worn through polish
To bare
His baby sleep
Of old men
¤
Window sat
Hunched over bones
Swallowing another shot
Whisky stained night
Slurs into dawn
¤
Whiling away
The life he grew into
Freight train passenger
Thundered boxcar
Building fires
¤
He wakes
Another day
On rails of the long haul
Ever closer
To familiar sameness
¤
The collected yellow
Of dried leaves
His brittle bones
Still
In motion of spun earth
10 comments:
Love this!!!! *bows to greatness*
wow. i think i know this guy...gotta be careful those leaves will fall apart...nice one shot.
Beautifully painted situation and scenery. The poem took me by the throat and pulled me in a train. Images of -INTO THE WILD- appeared. Compliments
Great work Heather.
whisky stained nights got me..great write heather
I especially like "Ever closer
To familiar sameness."
For many moons I slurred into dawn..
You immediately pulled me in with -
"Rocked wood
Worn through polish
To bare"
You're one of my very favorite poets, Heather. You're amazing!
dani
Dear Heather...
Its so lovely...thanks for sharing.
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Wonderful line breaks, word pictures, tone.
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